英语句子改错

英语句子改错

1.The story that Harry went on telling is the part which John left.

2.Specialists said that a lot of healthy problems are related to the bad eating habit and the lack of exercises.

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1.比较建议用tell the story.

2.没有talk the story about这种用法。

3.unbalance diet and be short of excersies

and 之前是名词结构之后却用了动词结构。

4.个人觉得unbalance diet 不均衡饮食与不良饮食还存在区别，此点仅作参考。可以联系自身最近所学内容进行判断。

1.哈利接着讲的故事是约翰剩下的部分:

"The story told by Harry was the continuation of what was left by John's narration."

2. 专家表示目前太多健康问题与不良饮食，缺乏锻炼有关:

"Specialists said that too many health problems at this age were linked to unbalanced diet and lack of exercises."

注:

(a)continuation =延续

(b)narration = 叙(故事)

(c) health problems = 健康问题; 不是 "healthy problems". "healthy" 已健康,何来<问题>?

(d)"What Hary (=Harry) went on talking(=telling) the story about(删) is the part which John left[=which was left by John]."

(e)"Specialists said that now many[太多=too many] physical[=health] problems are linked to unbalance [=unbalanced形容词;不用名词!] diet and be short[=lack缺乏] of excersies [excercises]."

1.比较建议用tell the story.

2.没有talk the story about这种用法。

3.unbalance diet and be short of excersies

and 之前是名词结构之后却用了动词结构。

4.个人觉得unbalance diet 不均衡饮食与不良饮食还存在区别，此点仅作参考。可以联系自身最近所学内容进行判断。